Reasponse to David's Song

Puddle of tears
And we look back to those years
When your words were so clear
It’s a new type of fear
You say it’s meant to be
Don’t say that you’re like me
You say he needed him
But I say we need him more
Hurricane God
Caused so much destruction




You got to open your eyes
And wait for sunrise
As the bird flies
Don’t believe in your lies
Just feed it goodbyes
And everything that passes on will be alright
With one last hug and a kiss goodnight




Don’t make me laugh
On behalf of the day
When I drove faith away
And it’s better now this way
You say it’s meant to be
Don’t say that you’re like me
You say he needed him
But I say we need him more
Hurricane God
Caused so much destruction


You got to open your eyes
And wait for sunrise
As the bird flies
Don’t need no baptize
Just accept with goodbyes
And everything that passes on will be alright
With one last hug and a kiss goodnight
One last hug and a kiss goodnight

This is a song I wrote when one of my relatives past away not so long ago.

I like how David wrote a song that is very important to him. This tells me that its so easy to write a song of any dominant impression when you can relate to it. That song came from his feelings inside, and i respect that. i have done something similar like what he did. i didnt write a song but poems. At one one point, not to long ago, i wrote a poem of my life. When i wrote this poem, it was when i was going through a really tough time in school. i was doing really bad in school because i didnt understand anything. so i wrote a poemand from that poem, i found a messege, that messege taught to keep on trying my best at school. Look at me know, Im at ASTI and going well. If i read the Davids song again i can find a messege in it. David might fing the messege of his song without even knowing. People die, but life keeps going on. Never let someones death bring you down. Even if its someone close to you. Always move foward in life. I know because my grandfather past away a couple of years ago. Yes i cried, but wasnt going to stop the pain inside. I moved on and so did my family. Like i said, i respect David alot for what he did. He wrote a song that relate to his feeling among his uncle.